Помогите исправить ошибки в англ. тексте.

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Всем доброго времени суток, задали написать ответ на вопрос из книги, на английском, в котором я не особо силен, может кто исправить ошибки, буду очень благодарен, заранее спасибо. Вот текст

Jane was not like her friends , peers , she was very nervous about it, not afraid to wear a dress, she was afraid that her parents would not behave so when meeting with Stan . She was very dreamy , often dreamed as Stan will give it to her bracelets. She was not arrogant , could not forgive the wall of his shortcomings. She was friendly , valued their friendship with Julie. She was kind . She was also modest , I think she was afraid of saying too much Stan , do not lead themselves to him. Also, she was able and ready to wait. But not all of it was typical teenage boy of fifteen , she wanted everything to be perfect, often analyze what other people think about it . Very worried , even when some little thing went wrong. That, I think , and conquered all of Stan .